I think the five slide layout will be much more legible an experience, especially since we do not have a physical presence in the presentation narrating. Below is an updated layout with this consideration. Much more room for copy that we are consolidating now. We aslo introduced the Teknion character right to the intro slide which I think is a great way to enhance the narrative and tie teknion's interest to the story. We added the buzzwords list to the third slide in the speech bubbles that currently say "Buzzwords." I think this enhances that particular graphic and will meet our goals in that respect. We will address specific graphic placement once the copy is ready but this update gives us a better feel for the final audience experience.
I will be adding a graphic to the 4th slide to better sell the idea of the modular kits, versatility etc..